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Kia ora! We are an awesome class of Year 3 and Year 4 students who love to show what we are learning. Thank you for taking an interest in our class.


Dairy
1. Dairy products are great sources of protein and calcium and are found in milk, cheese and yogurt. Protein helps our bodies to grow or repair themselves.
2. Protein builds, maintains, and replaces the tissues in your body.
3. Your muscles, organs, and immune system are made up mostly of protein. Calcium helps to keep our bones and teeth strong.
4. We should eat between two or three portions of dairy foods a day.
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Main idea/Title
Healthy Eating
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Introduction
Are your kids obese or got diabetes?, then listen to me I can help you keep your family safe and healthy.
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Argument 1
Firstly I'll tell you something there are kids in the UK that are obese that is three kids in one
so if your kid is obese I'll tell you why? They are obese because you are feeding them the wrong stuff in steed of healthy stuff like water,fruit, vegetables,meat,milk and grain food in steed you are feeding them fizzy,fast food and lollies.
If you want them to be healthy then tell your kids to eat 5 fruit a day. If your children or child eat too many junk food they will get obese or get
diabetes do you want you kids to get diabetes or be healthy? as a result there is lots of kids that got diabetes from eating too many lollies. do you know food keeps us healthy and it helps us to grow. |
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Argument 2
Secondly in my opinion your body needs minerals to make hormones, build bones and regulate your heartbeat.
For this to happen you need to eat fruit and vegetables to provide us with vitamins and minerals essential for keeping us healthy as well as fiber which is important for digestion. |
Conclusion
I think that we should eat healthy fruit everyday so that our families are healthy and strongI
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Main idea/Title
Healthy Eating
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Introduction
Do you want your kids to be healthy?
Well turn your eyes and ears and listen to me.
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Argument 1
In my opinion I think children should eat healthy because they can grow their bones, and their body’s will be nice and healthy.
Ok so i’m gonna tell you something, kids all around the world even here in New Zealand, there are kids that are obese and I will tell you why.
The reason why kids are getting obese is because parents aren’t being role models to their kids.
If your kids are eating junk food you can just eat an apple or any vegetable and when your kids see you eating healthy food you can give them
an apple or any vegetable and you will convince your child to eat healthy like you.
Another way your kids can start eating healthy is getting yummy fruits like, water melon, chopped apples and pineapples and then you can make
fresh smoothies for your kids. |
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Argument 2
I am sure that people in the world love to eat lollies as a everyday meal but in my opinion it is better if you and your child eat lollies once a week.
But kids will ask for treats once a while and it’s ok to say yes because it will be a treat for eating healthy everyday. If you eat more healthy your skin, teeth, hair and nails will look nice and shiny.
Argument 3
I think Eating healthy will help you and your children to have more energy to play and hang out with your friends.
Eating healthy is important for you because you can grow your bones and you and your child will be nice and healthy.Eating junk food will make you go slow, have less energy and you will become really lazy. |
Conclusion
In conclusion i think eating healthy if better for our children in our community and we will be safe and our skin, teeth, nails and hair will be healthy.
Do you agree with me?
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