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Thursday, 30 October 2014
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Monday, 20 October 2014
Recount Writing - WALT come up with language that enhances the mood/ideas of our writing.
In Room 5 has been focusing on building up their descriptive and figurative language around certain moods. Here are some of the best sentences
Mood
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Tamaiti
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Best Sentence
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growing confidence
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Gerry
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My nervousness began to shrink. It was as if I was getting a new skin. I shrugged away my shyness.
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getting ready to preform
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Hohepa
Shilaine |
We were standing in line like soldiers, waiting for power to come on us.
"Hopi, Kiraro!" Mana called like a chief above us. We were all in position, following his commands like trained warriors.We waited for the curtains to open again... 3, 2, 1 The curtains began to open! Right there in front of us was a massive, cheering crowd. It was like we were presenting on X Factor. |
Shy
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Gabrielle
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I wanted to sink into my own world and disappear
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Shy
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Peri
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There I stood, as timid as a mouse.
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Proud of myself
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Letisha
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“Hopi! Kiraro! Hopi!” I could see tiny little tears coming out the side of my whanaus eyes
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nervous
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Letisha
Hanita |
I was so nervous, eels twisting and turning inside my stomach
Walking onto the stage it felt like my tummy was a tuna net that eels were trying to slip out of. I was feeling nervous. |
Excitement
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Hanita
Jordan |
The excitement grew inside me like a dog knowing it is about to get a feed.
All eyes were on me, if I made a mistake it would haunt me |
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